मंगलवार, 27 जुलाई 2010

Pain of Missing.....

Pain of missing.... the forehead kissing
and the pleasure of spending time with her,

Adrenaline arising, Emotions enticing
Her love was support for my falling rapture.

Lub-dub vibrating, Brims osculating
Wrapping of arms takes us closer,

Oculus conversing, Sensations surging
The Ocean of love was got bit deeper.

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Scenario changing, when life was ranging
She moved away far and farther,

Scratched from starting, calls it new beginning
I'm alone and she got her partner.

Now,
Confidence shaken, but heart is not taking
That life is abyss when she is not here,

Moments hurting, situations flirtling
But still 'm escorting (life) like an 'Usher'.

Pain of missing.... the forehead kissing.....


.............................Komal............................

7 टिप्‍पणियां:

Deepika Vaidya ने कहा…

wowh...gr8 words..gr8 feel.. ^_^
n u got veryvry good command on words (though i needed a dictionary..kidding)
it was marvellos

Vikas Shrivastava ने कहा…

Deeps its dedicated to you only.... not meant for you but inspiration was u regarding writing in english.

Gaurav ने कहा…

Good one sir... today only I got to know dat U also write... n Gosh... All r really nice words...!! I hope U remembered me...!

amanshri ने कहा…

vicky dats awesome...n heartfull..<3 ur xcellent in english writing since school time . i remember.. :) go ahead ,now i will try2 catch u here too. gud luck...

Vikas Shrivastava ने कहा…

@Gaurav: Thanks... I do remember you dear...
@Aman: bhai hindi bhi padhna jarur...

thanks for visiting. Vikas

Pals ने कहा…

Every single word is beautiful.. jaise har shabd ek moti hai aur unhe aapne mala me piroya hai.. Bohot sundar..

Unknown ने कहा…

Just wow! Another excellent poem👌👌